Anyway, due to i had not fully completed a Ma.K kit before, juliuslim gave me this kit to experience.
I was trying to create a small vignette here with a simple story: A female mechanic was cleaning a really mud covered power suit and realise her fiance left a message for here on the suit. Well it was intended to be a sad story initially, with the boy was already dead during an operation. But, i failed miserably conveying the message as it ll be too complex for such a scene to tell the entire story. If i were to make it a pleasant surprise, i should have added the guy somewhere in the scene to further tell the story, which i didnt dued to time constraint n laziness.
On top of that, the concept of the suit almost fully covered by dry mud, makes the whole scene looks pretty undesirable. Fail #3. :(
This ll always serve as a reminder for me that good concept, not necessary can be converted to a good vignette.














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